I love this!
I love this!
Aw thank you : D
Okay this was pretty cute, smart, effective and understood what many writers get wrong; show don't tell! So many people often ruin the mood or the scene with pointless dialogue in a visual medium and I have to say this is a great example of what I'm talking about!
Edit: a great example of doing the show don't tell right is what I meant.
I really like this; a few things of feedback though;
1. the characters actions already imply that the guy is looking out for him, you don't need him monologuing about how great the guy is as a friend, though I will give you credit for actually showing us the actions unlike other shows I've seen.
2. With the over explaining, you gave away the twist, it's fine to give enough info but you gave away too much info.
Everything else though? Action; amazing! Characters? Amazing! Just, my god I love this even with the two gripes I have with this.
It's just salad fingers but with humans and with characters interacting with him. There is no straight man and it just gets... boring doing the same thing, over and over. Don't get me wrong; this was funny, when I was like what, 15?
This just feels like it's living off of the back of Salad Fingers and it's just nostalgia people are looking at.
It's slow paced, nothing really happened which again Salad Fingers was the same way but here nothing new is done, nothing; different. Tell me, is the next animated project just going to be the same thing but with different characters?
This is animated really good surpassingly enough!
This is cute; I can't help but smile when I watch this.
Breaking bad
I can confirm; Anya needs to be the star of the show for the next one, pretty please! Also to note; I love the angle of the shot, the distance and where you're putting the focus on, I like the facial expression changes on the two as they're both doing a rep of their own workouts.
I like the small details you even went with when it comes to the walls and the floor.
Another detail I like is the fact you have Anya big eyed cute look when she is watching her mom finish a rep while when she's doing her workout her eyes shrink and change shape.
Yeah, I've got to do one with Anya too now. But thank you very much man, I appreciate you taking a look into every detail. Gives me motivation to do these AND make them better!
For the love of god people; please read the tos before posting, this is using copyrighted content! This isn't Youtube!
I honestly had no clue, I’ll admit it was quite foolish of me to not read it! I’ll do better!
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