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[Takeoff - Idiotopia]

Personally I don't like it BUT I love all of the effort with the details, the sounds being on point, being a world I could see existing for it's given wackiness and rules. The joke at the end was pretty funny as well.

edit: why are you confused? I respect your work but I don't like it, Idk how that doesn't make sense.

[The Toilet Troll]

Bizarre animation; I don't even know why you'd need a phone to figure out the answer to that.

[Pikachu's Wink]

This is cute

[Women's Ball]

Women aren't miss treated in said sports; woman's basket ball can only exist because of male basket ball and literally the pay being given up by the male athletes.

Football women don't play with men because they would be killed, I'm not even being rude here; guys in football get MASSIVE!

I could overlook the message if the animation was any good and not poorly made. with character models being still, lack of detail, looks rushed, barely animated besides the basket ball with the key framing being what 6 frames?

The ground being a bizarre yellow instead of any actual color you'd see from said floors that would be used in such an environment.

The trophy looks fine.

And don't worry; I treat male animators just as harsh on here with brutal honest feedback.

Meschwerzi responds:

Thanks for you comments about my animation I'm very happy to see that news members comment the work. I will with you I think that's my animations was messed up but I didn't want to spend more time in this. I think you have real opinion of what it's stereotype personally I just share this message because of it's my subject and to add something I'm a man. My personality I think that my animations was a good result of my 1 month starting animation without any help, and I'm proud of my job. Thanks

[Don't Doubt the Youngsters (Pokemon Animatic)]

Okay; at least draw some of the assets yourself is the thing, besides the other parts, most of this isn't even drawn by you.

[Stan and Kyle Fight Part 1 [Low Res]]

Stilted, slow, lack of any animation, a lack of actual character movement expect small moments here and there.

I'll give you this; you at least did less waiting around this time around. A lot of the same criticisms I gave your first post I'll give here basically and not to repeat myself.

IamannpcIswear responds:

Well since I don't have good animation softwares (I use scratch) it takes hours just to create 1 second of a movie so I mostly show leaks on things im working on so thank you for your response ill try better when the full thing comes out (Sorry for the bad spelling I am rushing)

[Stan and Kyle Fight! [Part 1]]

Some feedback;
barely any animation
Barely any movement
Blaring the sound
Not even 3 seconds of action and mostly them just standing there

For South Park it works when they do that because it's followed by humor to break the silence; in anime when you do the stupid the two bad ass characters stand there for a while until they finally act is to save on budget and have the awesome moments kick in.

Here it does none of it; very stilted, very lack of actual movement to the characters, even South Park had more animated fights than this!

IamannpcIswear responds:

yeah this was animated on scratch so its obviously going to be poor maybe if I find an animation software i'll finallyly be a better animator

[worst oscar speech]

The joke is too awkward and slow; the joke drags on, if you're going to do a joke that's not funny have it be short and to the point to save the audience the trouble of listening to it.

[Snickerdoodle (Original Cartoon Series) Theme song]

The cuteness I find on this site is slowly killing me, it's too much!

[Showreel 2022]

Personally; I don't like it BUT it is very stylized and different I would say.