Damn you did an amazing job with this! I can't wait to see your other works!
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Damn you did an amazing job with this! I can't wait to see your other works!
Good anal sex position and scene set up; I like the camera angle as well.
That was a fun watch; better than most shows I see on TV. This had an awesome beginning, great set up and explaining the world with it's setting with very little exposition. The background art was great.
I genuinely mean this; flesh out the mechanics a bit more as in go more in depth and you could have a very simple but fun brothel RPG game.
Edit: I take it back, there is actual thoughtful synergy for how your girls synergize with one another, this has to be the only NSFW game I've played where the more you play the depth and gameplay actually opens up to having to take a different approach with different characters.
When what character is active or not; which girl is asleep or not. There is actual thought put behind the gameplay.
Okay this game is addictive to say the very least; holy hell I love the ideas/ concepts done with this, I hope this gets expanded upon because it's quite addictive, I could honestly see your idea being the Fire Emblem of Newgrounds.
OMG, that means a lot, dude. Thanks! We are going to release the full version by the end of the year, and it will be several times bigger. So, join our Discord if you want to stay tuned or talk about the game :)
Look let me explain a couple issues here;
sound design doesn't fit
Overly simple (of course I'm bringing up the fact you want to make profit from this)
As a clone of a game; the idea is to be the same quality if not better.
The gameplay loop is simpler than the original for what it is for the given ideas you've presented.
It's half baked ideas that you need to work at making some improvements on design wise if you want people to engage with your content more.
Edit: let me make this clear, it's still poorly designed; YOU put a game up that was going to be judged on a site like this. I am giving you honest, constructive feedback hobby or not. The, "oh this is just a hobby" THE WHOLE POINT OF A HOBBY, IS TO GET BETTER AT IT!
I have made countless bad games/ bad art and you want to know why I don't upload it to here expect a few expectations? Because the art in question I made is BAD, I know it'll be poorly received!
If you honest to god don't care to improve at your craft then why do you care if I leave a review?
let me answer you... all the games I make here are just a hobby, I have no intention of profiting from it (although it's a dream)...
*but the sound is horrible/doesn't fit and the graphics are plain*
friend... even if the game is simple, with sound that doesn't fit and with simple design, I'm happy because my game even with these problems, it's working fine without bugs.
no need to send me YouTube channel with game design tips as for me there is no need at the moment... see for example Baldi Basic's, his graphics are not good but he has fans because of his story and gameplay.
I'm sorry to say, you are providing constructive criticism and problematizing at the same time. and don't expect to make games with amazing graphics because that will be hard to do (maybe in a future update).
that's all
edit: I cared about your comment because look... I liked your feedback and your tips, but the problem is that you started humiliating me, like you started complaining about the photo I posted in a post from my workplace, the Minecraft porn I watched these days, you saying that Newgrounds only good artists are welcome here, this made me deeply upset
Not as good as your first song but not bad, not good; pretty decent. The bass is too high, beginning is a bit too repetitive. The other elements of the music are at odds too much.
Yeah I know, I'm still trying to improve with the songs but mostly I just do it like it's not always the best one I have ever made you know
Better than me.
Besides the fact voice actor 1 is annoying to listen to; voice actor 2 is honestly pretty good to listen but where is the jokes? Jokes have set up, twist and punch line. This literally just sounds like American politics on Twitter with the two Russians arguing against one another.
"He is orange" and "Joe Biden is great president" ok, but where is the joke?
"He go into a coffin and wake up a zombie" ok but where is the joke, you two aren't playing off of each other.
Humor works when two people play off each other; you two aren't playing all that different of characters, in order for humor, jokes to work you need two people to be playing off of each other if you want to do this kind of humor.
Let me use an example, not a great example mind you but an example to get the point across.
Russian one: "Joe Biden has been shown to be sleeping at important meetings and the media focused on his favorite flavor of ice cream; he has failed to do any effective policy to help the average American."
Russian two: "He not orange like Trump, he's a great leader! He's been an outstanding leader for the rest of the world!"
Russian one: "Good leader? He left military weapons and vehicles overseas, what do you mean good leader?"
Russian two: "I never said he was good for America; now help me hot wire this tank."
Yeah my joke isn't funny but it's meant to get the point across; back and forth should be going between the two, the two should be playing off of each other; acting different from one another.
For the love of god; avoid the Teen Titans Go style of writing of; "look at this; we wrote two characters to be the same people with no personality differences!"
I lost brain cells reading this
That's a thick peach
I like the outfit the character is wearing.
The 3D model looks amazing, I love the dynamic pose!
Thank you! But this is not a 3D model! This is real figurine! ;3
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