Yeah it'll take Frieren 50 years to realize this; considering how long it took her to figure out Himmel knew what the lotus ring meant... I don't want to spoil anything but if you know, you know.

(Note, bought the whole thing off Gum Road) Not badly animated, dialogue a bit cringe with the porn dialogue, I didn't really care for the close up of her face, not a bad voice actor and overall good.

Just for the joke of "and this is where you'll be sleeping" as a joke, idk why I find that so funny.

I genuinely mean this; flesh out the mechanics a bit more as in go more in depth and you could have a very simple but fun brothel RPG game.

Edit: I take it back, there is actual thoughtful synergy for how your girls synergize with one another, this has to be the only NSFW game I've played where the more you play the depth and gameplay actually opens up to having to take a different approach with different characters.

When what character is active or not; which girl is asleep or not. There is actual thought put behind the gameplay.

Okay this game is addictive to say the very least; holy hell I love the ideas/ concepts done with this, I hope this gets expanded upon because it's quite addictive, I could honestly see your idea being the Fire Emblem of Newgrounds.

Look let me explain a couple issues here;

sound design doesn't fit
Overly simple (of course I'm bringing up the fact you want to make profit from this)
As a clone of a game; the idea is to be the same quality if not better.
The gameplay loop is simpler than the original for what it is for the given ideas you've presented.

It's half baked ideas that you need to work at making some improvements on design wise if you want people to engage with your content more.

Edit: let me make this clear, it's still poorly designed; YOU put a game up that was going to be judged on a site like this. I am giving you honest, constructive feedback hobby or not. The, "oh this is just a hobby" THE WHOLE POINT OF A HOBBY, IS TO GET BETTER AT IT!

I have made countless bad games/ bad art and you want to know why I don't upload it to here expect a few expectations? Because the art in question I made is BAD, I know it'll be poorly received!

If you honest to god don't care to improve at your craft then why do you care if I leave a review?

Besides the fact voice actor 1 is annoying to listen to; voice actor 2 is honestly pretty good to listen but where is the jokes? Jokes have set up, twist and punch line. This literally just sounds like American politics on Twitter with the two Russians arguing against one another.

"He is orange" and "Joe Biden is great president" ok, but where is the joke?

"He go into a coffin and wake up a zombie" ok but where is the joke, you two aren't playing off of each other.

Humor works when two people play off each other; you two aren't playing all that different of characters, in order for humor, jokes to work you need two people to be playing off of each other if you want to do this kind of humor.

Let me use an example, not a great example mind you but an example to get the point across.

Russian one: "Joe Biden has been shown to be sleeping at important meetings and the media focused on his favorite flavor of ice cream; he has failed to do any effective policy to help the average American."

Russian two: "He not orange like Trump, he's a great leader! He's been an outstanding leader for the rest of the world!"

Russian one: "Good leader? He left military weapons and vehicles overseas, what do you mean good leader?"

Russian two: "I never said he was good for America; now help me hot wire this tank."

Yeah my joke isn't funny but it's meant to get the point across; back and forth should be going between the two, the two should be playing off of each other; acting different from one another.

For the love of god; avoid the Teen Titans Go style of writing of; "look at this; we wrote two characters to be the same people with no personality differences!"

Okay look I am giving my honest feedback so please don't mad at me and I know not everything is for everyone.

To me this sounds like pretentious trash I would write in my teens with the repeat of words, timing and how the poem is laid out. The ideals and the characterization are trying to be relatable with it's words with the fact of loafing around where you're trying to be taking action, this hits an emotional stride in people that makes them relate to what is being said here.

I don't really care about the timing, the verbiage and the word choice chosen. It's well made don't get me wrong, I just don't value this in any meaningful way so perhaps that's why it doesn't hit the same emotional stride in me with it's themes and poetry.

Okay let me give some helpful feedback;
it assaults' the ears too much
It's too repetitive
There is no rhythm to it.
If you want to do something simple, then do something simple with a simple beat, timing, etc.
If you want to do something complex then it's tougher balancing act but you can't be as repetitive as you are here.
I'm bad at making music too and sure as heck this sounds like it was mashed together with little to no effort put into it.

New girl and she's a hot Artic Fox!!!

Quite honestly I don't blame him for wanting to end the physical intimacy with the cunt asking a question like that in the middle of sex.

I would refuse a threesome. Idgaf about having sex with another man being there.