GameSmashDash's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Manly Mexican cartoon man]

Some of the sound effects do not match BUT I love this to death, it is very well animated and I wish more kids cartoons were animated like this.

The-Vlah responds:

Many thanks for the kind words, much appreciated. You're absolutely right about the sfx, sound isn't my strong side when it comes to making cartoons.

[There's always HOPE]

A good beginner project but personally I just think it's "meh".

ESousa responds:

Fair, thanks for the criticism

[Peppino vs Cheese monster gal]

Man I was hoping for Peppino to style on Cheese Monster gal.

[Retep meets Peter]

lazy, uninspired, lazy sprite swap, lazy writing, lazy dialogue; no animation at all.

Edit: You know what, I'll give some useful criticism, no need for my feedback to be lazy as your video afterall.

Writing; rules of 3 for writing when it comes to jokes.

Dialogue should be snappy or match the character, be line, something that's gone with a flow, improv has a flow of "yes and" approach. Slow drawn out Marvel humor of dialogue isn't funny.

Jokes should be act, react; not Marvel style humor where it's very one sided or a joke repeating or having no actual weight.

The color pallets being swapped isn't clever and has been a million times from lazy Sonic OCs to this. Some creative ways you could do the same trope of the "swapped character looks, woah!' is instead give actual physical looks and behaviors.

Uninspired because you didn't do anything new; anything and I mean ANYTHING different than the million times it's been done before. Just some twist on the tropes.

Is that useful enough feedback.

Sonicfan113 responds:

ok, thank you for the criticism. if I make more, I'll try to not do what you complained



by the way, it kinda was. but you didn't need to insult my video in the process. I get it, you don't like it and think it's lazy, no need to say it more times.

[Moushley's Drama]

I love this too much.

[Mario enters the wrong tube]

I love how well animated this was!

[RE4 Remake Ada vs Leon]

Holy crap the action is amazing! The way Ada is acrobatic with Leon dodging her attacks and relying more on punches and to try to trip his opponent. Leon getting that kick to the stomach looked amazing!

Also the way Ada took advantage of being unable to punch and having her think on her feet, brilliant! Effectively getting the personality of the two down in how they fight!

Bronksson responds:

Well thanks a bunch man, really appreciate you digging into this and let's me know my intentions with it came across! Glad you enjoyed it 😁✌️🤓

[Takeoff - Idiotopia]

Personally I don't like it BUT I love all of the effort with the details, the sounds being on point, being a world I could see existing for it's given wackiness and rules. The joke at the end was pretty funny as well.

edit: why are you confused? I respect your work but I don't like it, Idk how that doesn't make sense.