GameSmashDash's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Velma & Daphne Go Trick-Or-Treating | Scooby Doo parody]

Knowing you and the fact this is rated M; there was no way in hell this was going to end in them covered in cum. Especially the way they were pulling. This was funny though, albeit got a bit too long to get to the pay off.

Have the pacing be a bit tighter and the joke would've been a bit better. Keep in mind I have a bias for this kind of slapstick comedy.

teemovsall responds:

OKKKKK

[Scout's Bizarre Adventure Ep1 Scout Finds the Plug]

WTF is this; I've seen lazy but man.

MaskEB responds:

Gmod animations are not for everyone I can see why you think its lazy.

[Rent is Due]

I mostly just like it for it's style and nothing else; I like the colors you chose, the backgrounds and how the spells interact with objects in the animation.

GoesBySully responds:

Thx dude

[fight between 2 men of different ethnic backgrounds]

The mods aren't removing it; it's auto removed once it's score is too low 0.5 rated by the audience on here. If your content is rated too low.

Keep in mind you're on a niche of a niche of a site, getting a 0.5 means you're appealing to a niche of a niche if that.

ZabuJard responds:

i wish that was the case, also seriously a 0 score? ur cringe.

it was removed by a mod for violating hate speech for the swatstika and title i was told by a mod.

[Manly Mexican cartoon man]

Some of the sound effects do not match BUT I love this to death, it is very well animated and I wish more kids cartoons were animated like this.

The-Vlah responds:

Many thanks for the kind words, much appreciated. You're absolutely right about the sfx, sound isn't my strong side when it comes to making cartoons.

[There's always HOPE]

A good beginner project but personally I just think it's "meh".

ESousa responds:

Fair, thanks for the criticism

[Retep meets Peter]

lazy, uninspired, lazy sprite swap, lazy writing, lazy dialogue; no animation at all.

Edit: You know what, I'll give some useful criticism, no need for my feedback to be lazy as your video afterall.

Writing; rules of 3 for writing when it comes to jokes.

Dialogue should be snappy or match the character, be line, something that's gone with a flow, improv has a flow of "yes and" approach. Slow drawn out Marvel humor of dialogue isn't funny.

Jokes should be act, react; not Marvel style humor where it's very one sided or a joke repeating or having no actual weight.

The color pallets being swapped isn't clever and has been a million times from lazy Sonic OCs to this. Some creative ways you could do the same trope of the "swapped character looks, woah!' is instead give actual physical looks and behaviors.

Uninspired because you didn't do anything new; anything and I mean ANYTHING different than the million times it's been done before. Just some twist on the tropes.

Is that useful enough feedback.

Sonicfan113 responds:

ok, thank you for the criticism. if I make more, I'll try to not do what you complained



by the way, it kinda was. but you didn't need to insult my video in the process. I get it, you don't like it and think it's lazy, no need to say it more times.

[RE4 Remake Ada vs Leon]

Holy crap the action is amazing! The way Ada is acrobatic with Leon dodging her attacks and relying more on punches and to try to trip his opponent. Leon getting that kick to the stomach looked amazing!

Also the way Ada took advantage of being unable to punch and having her think on her feet, brilliant! Effectively getting the personality of the two down in how they fight!

Bronksson responds:

Well thanks a bunch man, really appreciate you digging into this and let's me know my intentions with it came across! Glad you enjoyed it 😁✌️🤓

[Women's Ball]

Women aren't miss treated in said sports; woman's basket ball can only exist because of male basket ball and literally the pay being given up by the male athletes.

Football women don't play with men because they would be killed, I'm not even being rude here; guys in football get MASSIVE!

I could overlook the message if the animation was any good and not poorly made. with character models being still, lack of detail, looks rushed, barely animated besides the basket ball with the key framing being what 6 frames?

The ground being a bizarre yellow instead of any actual color you'd see from said floors that would be used in such an environment.

The trophy looks fine.

And don't worry; I treat male animators just as harsh on here with brutal honest feedback.

Meschwerzi responds:

Thanks for you comments about my animation I'm very happy to see that news members comment the work. I will with you I think that's my animations was messed up but I didn't want to spend more time in this. I think you have real opinion of what it's stereotype personally I just share this message because of it's my subject and to add something I'm a man. My personality I think that my animations was a good result of my 1 month starting animation without any help, and I'm proud of my job. Thanks